Fellow devs, can I ask for feedback please?

I am hunting our live video podcast for community builders next week and I'd love your feedback on the copy and the art:

I've build a draft using PreviewHunt

Please bash the copy and the art so we have a chance to improve it:

• what was confusing about how it looks and feels?
• what message did resonate with you?
• anything that annoyed you?

Thanks!